AUDIENCE FEEDBACK

Rough Cut 1:

For my first audience feedback, I asked my classmate Clodagh as she is the primary target audience for the video. She took notes on editing and narrative improvements, and I asked her to focus on constructive feedback rather than positive as this is my first draft and I have a lot to improve. 

Here is the feedback she gave me:

• Remove dateline 
• No blurry shots 
• Remove shake 
• Have a clearer narrative, group locations together
• Add a coin clink at the start
• Remove sped up walk in the door
• Remove house footage, reflection looks bad
• Layer cars
• Shorten walking at start 
• Keep tram shots together 

Rough Cut 2:

I asked my media classmates to watch the video and give me more technical feedback. 

These are the improvements they suggested: 

- Add colouring, maybe a LUT

- Add titles 
- Remove initial mirror shot, doesn’t tie in with narrative
- Remove second pool sound effect
- Add a pool balls close up
- Add a plane overlay
- Match clips to the beat
- Add fade to black